Erotica Sketches

Abby Gayle

New Member
A good friend of mine who posts here said this would be a good place to practice my porn chops, so I'm giving it a whirl...feedback is welcome, let me know if I'm any good, or just a pretender.
 

VKD

Banned
you go girl!
 

The Question

Eternal
Show us the titzes! :bigass:
 

Abby Gayle

New Member
"Let's take a shower" he said.

Soon the bath was all steamy and hot, and we were both naked and wet and slick from the water. He took some shampoo, and with one hand started to massage my scalp and hair with it, working it in. His other hand covered with soap, let itself slickly wander over my body. Pinching my nipples gently, they rose to his touch tiny hard pebbles. I could feel that stiffness way down in my belly causing my cunt to flower, the lips puffing out with anticipation quietly yeildingly opening.

He put his other arm around me as he massaged my scalp holding me tightly. This caused my already moist pussy to gush. It was a feeling I had never quite experienced before, being held by a strong man covered with hot water while he slowly massaged my scalp. I loved it and nestled into his broad chest, letting my hands flatten against it as I got wetter and wetter.

He rinsed out my hair and had me turn around. He took the shower head off the holder and turned the head until it was a fine pulsing single jet. He put his left leg on the rim of the tub and steadied himself against the shower wall. He had me straddle his leg so I was sitting on his upper thigh, and then he played the stream of hot water right on my now aching, horny cunt. GOD! What a feeling that was. The water pulsed on my vagina, and he started to do this little flex with his foot on the edge of the tub, causing his thigh muscle to flex directly under my vagina pulsing on my pussy. I couldn't believe it at first because the feeling was so perfect, and he wasn't inside me. Each little flex of his foot, and they were very small flexes, caused my pussy to clench, and I could feel my clit start to "twitch". I started to come from it, helplessly and as I did my moans were swallowed by his deep kisses as I came in his arms.
 

The Question

Eternal
Not bad. Try for a little more setup going into it. Remember: "Getting there is half the fun."
 
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