A Poem For Eloisel

[jack]

Not easy to state the change you've made
For, if I'm alive now well then I was dead.
Cement. Steel. Black wind howling down the corridor.
Each dead head held a visor of ice.
And....
I slept on like a bent finger
Asleep, warm within the cold.

Then her finger came through the layers
touching, stirring me like a spoon
so gently (thoroughly) effectively
And....
I woke up from that slumber like some twisted rumplestiltskin
Wishing I was there with you.

 

[The Dork Lord]

Lovely

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

trés belle

 

[jack]

Not easy to state the change you've made
For, if I'm alive now well then I was dead.
Cement. Steel. Black wind howling down the corridor.
Each dead head held a visor of ice.
And....
I slept on like a bent finger
Asleep, warm within the cold.

Then her finger came through the layers
touching, stirring me like a spoon
so gently (thoroughly) effectively
And....
I woke up from that slumber like some twisted rumplestiltskin
Wishing I was there with you.

I remember when I wrote this

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

Unbelieveably good