CaptainWacky
I want to smell dark matter
I was crouched down behind a pile of puddings. Fuddlemiff the pudding salesman was in position. The moment had finally arrived, the thing I had been working towards for months. Finally I was about to catch the Pudding Strangler. The bell on the door of the pudding shop rang. He was here.
"I'll have ten grape egg puddings, please," I heard him say.
"With shell or without?" asked Fuddlemiff, playing his part perfectly.
"With, of course!" said the Pudding Strangler.
"Ah ha!" I said, jumping out of my hiding place. I nodded to Fuddlemiff and he retreated to the pudding stockroom. "Finally I have you!"
"What!" said the Pudding Strangler. "Who are you!?"
"You know perfectly well who I am!" I said, ripping off the false beard I was wearing, revealing my real beard underneath.
"Wackson!" said the Pudding Strangler. "The famous detective! But how did you know I'd be here!"
"SCIENTIFIC ANALYSIS!" I said, proudly. "I ate every stinking pudding you left by the body of your victims and came to the inescapable conclusion that they were grape egg flavoured. With shell!"
"That doesn't make me the killer!" he protested.
"No? No one else would even know grape egg puddings exist! You created the flavour yourself, to satiate your sickening desires! Once we figured that out it was a simple matter co-opt the nearest pudding shop to the area we suspected you live and instruct them to begin stocking grape egg pudding! I knew you wouldn't be able to resist shopping here, as being able to buy grape egg pudding would save you time on making the pudding and give you more time to commit murders!"
"But how do you know I'm not just a member of the public who wants to indulge in some grape egg pudding?"
"WITH shell? Please!" I said, shaking my head. And then he smiled. I had him at last.
"Very good," he said. "Of course, there's one mistake you've made, Wackson. A mistake I don't think your old friend, the DEARLY MISSED Dr Dave would have made. You're alone in a pudding shop with the Pudding Strangler!"
"Not quite alone!" I said. And at that moment, Inspector Tomtrek of the Yard rose from underneath the floor, through the trapdoor I'd had specially constructed in the pudding shop.
"You're nicked!" said Inspector Tomtrek, grabbing the Pudding Strangler by the lapel. "Your strangling days are over!"
"Curses!" said the Pudding Strangler. "Maybe you are a great detective after all, Wackson. Not as great AS DR DAVE WAS but still pretty good!" He spat on the floor.
"Take him away, boys!" said Inspector Tomtrek, kicking the Pudding Strangler in the bum and out the door, into the hands of his officers. Tomtrek and I walked out of the shop, talking.
"Well, that's over with," I said. I couldn't help but feel a sense of disappointment that it was all over. Yes I'd caught a serial killer...but it wasn't the same as it had been in the old days. Before Dr Dave had fell to his death with his evil twin brother Dr Dace...
"It was a stroke of genius to have that trapdoor built under the shop!" Tomtrek said to me, perhaps sensing how I was feeling.
"I don't know about genius," I said. "Two our people were strangled while the trapdoor was being built!"
"Still, without your detective work we never would have cuaght the fellow."
"I'm not...him." I looked at the ground, sadly.
"It must have hurt, hearing the pudding strangler say his name," said Tomtrek. "It's been two years now, hasn't it?"
"Yes," I said. "And the world is a poorer place without him. He would have caught the Pudding Strangler after only one murder, not after seventeen like I did!"
"Perhaps," said Tomtrek. "But there's no use dwelling on things. You've done some DAMN SOLID DETECTIVE WORK in the last two years. That counterfeit Nintendo ring you shut down, for example!"
"Those bastards!" I said, shaking my fist as I remembered their shoddy Legend Of Zelda knock-offs.
"And I know you've...suffered in your personal life, but you've still got your visits to Cassie's brotherl!"
"Hey, it's not a brothel! It's a foam bath house! For foam baths."
"SURE!" said Tomtrek, laughing. I laughed too.
"It's just...it's not the same," I said. "I feel my finest days are behind me."
"At least you knew him," said Tomtrek, seriously. "Oh, sure, I had dealings with Dr Dave but I never KNEW HIM inside out like you did. To have access to that mind...even for a short time. You were blessed." These words rang true to me. I smiled.
"You're right, by jove!" I said. "Thank you, Inspector Tomtrek. I'm going home now, but you're welcome to come by later for a game of cards."
"Perhaps I'll take you up on that!" said Tomtrek. I knew he wouldn't, of course. Nobody ever wanted a game of cards. "Until then!"
He parted ways. I headed home, remembering my friend Dr Dave with every step. I remembered the time we'd arrested the blackface killers, the time we'd broken up that ring of homosexual fishermen...so many memories.
I found three thugs waiting outside my flat. I recognised them. The Nintendo counterfeiters! Out of jail already.
"There he is!" said one thug. They approached me. I started to back away...but a fourth thug had snuck up from behind. There was no one else around but an hooded old man shuffling in the distance.
"Clever girl," I said.
"Thought you'd seen the last of us, didn't you!" said the Head Thug. "We got out early by grassing up some SEGA fraudsters!"
"They should have thrown away the key on all of you!" I said, unable to contain my rage.
"What's it to you anyway!" said the Head Thug. "Why does it bother you if some kids play Superb Mario Karting or Meatroid Prone or Donkey Hump Cuntry instead of the real games? What does it matter?"
"BECAUSE IT'S WRONG!" I raged. I threw one of the thugs over my head with a surprise judo throw. Another I kicked in the chest. But a third hit me on the back of the head with a large stick. I saw the head thug laughing.
"You're nothing without your MANFRIEND Dr Dave. He was a fighter, not you!" This was true. I tried to get to me feet but was hit again. And head thug strode towards me with a knife. And then...
The hooded old man was running towards us! He nailed the head thug with a flying karate kick and sweeped the leg out of the second. The third ran at him too, but the old man bested him in hand to hand combat. There was something about the way he fought. Something singular. Yes, quite singular indeed...
The fourth span me round but I quickly punched him in the neck and then kicked him in the face. I turned back to see the old man, but he was gone. Then it came to me, his fighting style. There was only one place I had seen it before. There was no mistaking it.
He had fought in the exact same style as Dr Dave.
TO BE CONTINUDED
"I'll have ten grape egg puddings, please," I heard him say.
"With shell or without?" asked Fuddlemiff, playing his part perfectly.
"With, of course!" said the Pudding Strangler.
"Ah ha!" I said, jumping out of my hiding place. I nodded to Fuddlemiff and he retreated to the pudding stockroom. "Finally I have you!"
"What!" said the Pudding Strangler. "Who are you!?"
"You know perfectly well who I am!" I said, ripping off the false beard I was wearing, revealing my real beard underneath.
"Wackson!" said the Pudding Strangler. "The famous detective! But how did you know I'd be here!"
"SCIENTIFIC ANALYSIS!" I said, proudly. "I ate every stinking pudding you left by the body of your victims and came to the inescapable conclusion that they were grape egg flavoured. With shell!"
"That doesn't make me the killer!" he protested.
"No? No one else would even know grape egg puddings exist! You created the flavour yourself, to satiate your sickening desires! Once we figured that out it was a simple matter co-opt the nearest pudding shop to the area we suspected you live and instruct them to begin stocking grape egg pudding! I knew you wouldn't be able to resist shopping here, as being able to buy grape egg pudding would save you time on making the pudding and give you more time to commit murders!"
"But how do you know I'm not just a member of the public who wants to indulge in some grape egg pudding?"
"WITH shell? Please!" I said, shaking my head. And then he smiled. I had him at last.
"Very good," he said. "Of course, there's one mistake you've made, Wackson. A mistake I don't think your old friend, the DEARLY MISSED Dr Dave would have made. You're alone in a pudding shop with the Pudding Strangler!"
"Not quite alone!" I said. And at that moment, Inspector Tomtrek of the Yard rose from underneath the floor, through the trapdoor I'd had specially constructed in the pudding shop.
"You're nicked!" said Inspector Tomtrek, grabbing the Pudding Strangler by the lapel. "Your strangling days are over!"
"Curses!" said the Pudding Strangler. "Maybe you are a great detective after all, Wackson. Not as great AS DR DAVE WAS but still pretty good!" He spat on the floor.
"Take him away, boys!" said Inspector Tomtrek, kicking the Pudding Strangler in the bum and out the door, into the hands of his officers. Tomtrek and I walked out of the shop, talking.
"Well, that's over with," I said. I couldn't help but feel a sense of disappointment that it was all over. Yes I'd caught a serial killer...but it wasn't the same as it had been in the old days. Before Dr Dave had fell to his death with his evil twin brother Dr Dace...
"It was a stroke of genius to have that trapdoor built under the shop!" Tomtrek said to me, perhaps sensing how I was feeling.
"I don't know about genius," I said. "Two our people were strangled while the trapdoor was being built!"
"Still, without your detective work we never would have cuaght the fellow."
"I'm not...him." I looked at the ground, sadly.
"It must have hurt, hearing the pudding strangler say his name," said Tomtrek. "It's been two years now, hasn't it?"
"Yes," I said. "And the world is a poorer place without him. He would have caught the Pudding Strangler after only one murder, not after seventeen like I did!"
"Perhaps," said Tomtrek. "But there's no use dwelling on things. You've done some DAMN SOLID DETECTIVE WORK in the last two years. That counterfeit Nintendo ring you shut down, for example!"
"Those bastards!" I said, shaking my fist as I remembered their shoddy Legend Of Zelda knock-offs.
"And I know you've...suffered in your personal life, but you've still got your visits to Cassie's brotherl!"
"Hey, it's not a brothel! It's a foam bath house! For foam baths."
"SURE!" said Tomtrek, laughing. I laughed too.
"It's just...it's not the same," I said. "I feel my finest days are behind me."
"At least you knew him," said Tomtrek, seriously. "Oh, sure, I had dealings with Dr Dave but I never KNEW HIM inside out like you did. To have access to that mind...even for a short time. You were blessed." These words rang true to me. I smiled.
"You're right, by jove!" I said. "Thank you, Inspector Tomtrek. I'm going home now, but you're welcome to come by later for a game of cards."
"Perhaps I'll take you up on that!" said Tomtrek. I knew he wouldn't, of course. Nobody ever wanted a game of cards. "Until then!"
He parted ways. I headed home, remembering my friend Dr Dave with every step. I remembered the time we'd arrested the blackface killers, the time we'd broken up that ring of homosexual fishermen...so many memories.
I found three thugs waiting outside my flat. I recognised them. The Nintendo counterfeiters! Out of jail already.
"There he is!" said one thug. They approached me. I started to back away...but a fourth thug had snuck up from behind. There was no one else around but an hooded old man shuffling in the distance.
"Clever girl," I said.
"Thought you'd seen the last of us, didn't you!" said the Head Thug. "We got out early by grassing up some SEGA fraudsters!"
"They should have thrown away the key on all of you!" I said, unable to contain my rage.
"What's it to you anyway!" said the Head Thug. "Why does it bother you if some kids play Superb Mario Karting or Meatroid Prone or Donkey Hump Cuntry instead of the real games? What does it matter?"
"BECAUSE IT'S WRONG!" I raged. I threw one of the thugs over my head with a surprise judo throw. Another I kicked in the chest. But a third hit me on the back of the head with a large stick. I saw the head thug laughing.
"You're nothing without your MANFRIEND Dr Dave. He was a fighter, not you!" This was true. I tried to get to me feet but was hit again. And head thug strode towards me with a knife. And then...
The hooded old man was running towards us! He nailed the head thug with a flying karate kick and sweeped the leg out of the second. The third ran at him too, but the old man bested him in hand to hand combat. There was something about the way he fought. Something singular. Yes, quite singular indeed...
The fourth span me round but I quickly punched him in the neck and then kicked him in the face. I turned back to see the old man, but he was gone. Then it came to me, his fighting style. There was only one place I had seen it before. There was no mistaking it.
He had fought in the exact same style as Dr Dave.
TO BE CONTINUDED