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My Blood Runs Cold Issues

It's not all bad though. There's lots of beer, poker and pool with friends and family to break up the monotony.
 
Hopefully, they don't beat you about the head and neck with a thick stick for the black paint smears and ballsack funk on the pool cues and cards too often.
 
Hopefully, they don't beat you about the head and neck with a thick stick for the black paint smears and ballsack funk on the pool cues and cards too often.

No they ask me if I have any black paint leftover so we all can get blackfaced and blackballed and go out and rape some lady niggers.
 
Y'know, revisions could be tackled a lot faster if you worthless halfwit horsefucking haters would provide actual, legitimately constructive criticism instead of idiotic vaguefag shit. I post things like this for genuine feedback, not so you can just spew shit everywhere like lactose-intolerant infants.
 
Moderate structural revisions to Act 1.

You need major structural revisions to the whole book. I recommend a hack and slash job or a scorched earth policy. That crapload bearing beam has got to go also.


Y'know, revisions could be tackled a lot faster if you worthless halfwit horsefucking haters would provide actual, legitimately constructive criticism instead of idiotic vaguefag shit. I post things like this for genuine feedback, not so you can just spew shit everywhere like lactose-intolerant infants.

See answer above. Happy now?
 
I read it. The excerpt anyway.

Anyway, I don't want to read the whole book, because then I might have to admit its pretty damn........
 
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