Neon

[The Dork Lord]

something New, sort of. Nasa just published its photo of " The Hand of God". A young pulsar spinning a nebula. it is quite impressive.


I have seen the Hand of God
Spinning in space out there
Where only the Angels have trod
To gaze the seed of Creation
it could be an illusion
A trick of the light
On a clear Summer's night
And I wonder
Whose breath blows the nebula
Around the pulsar
As I try to touch the sky
I know what he saw
The Agony and the Ecstasy

I like this one a lot, even tho it reminds me of like 7 different songs...

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

And there's only a D and F in you. Besides, that was only the skelton.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

I like this one a lot, even tho it reminds me of like 7 different songs...

Which ones? Oh that last was for Dirk, not you.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

Zenith By Angela SH Garcia NeonMercuryASH


If you look into heaven
You'll see the Hand of God
Rocking the cradle of creation
Where the Angels have trod
Could be an illusion
A trick of light on a clear night
And I wonder
Whose breath
Warmed the pulsar
Who lit the flame
From the fingers
If I could I would touch the sky
And all our passions wane
Standing here before the great
Wonderously insane
Found the footfalls
Buried in the sand
But can we crawl
To touch that hand?
This has all
Happened once before
The Agony and Ecstasy
Painted cold aux ciel
The quasar keeps pulsing
Gently out of phase
Connect us with eternity
We exist only to amaze

 

[The Dork Lord]

Which ones? Oh that last was for Dirk, not you.

Oh I didn't know there were "for" different people.

I'm not allowed to comment on pieces created for other people?

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

There's no A in effort.

This Dirk!!!! Of course you can comment. Except yours came in a tad before i flamed him, and now I am sooo embarassed.

 

[The Dork Lord]

This Dirk!!!! Of course you can comment. Except yours came in a tad before i flamed him, and now I am sooo embarassed.

Ah. No need for that, we're all adults here. Anywway, the songs...

I have seen the Hand of God

Sabbath -- War Pigs

To gaze the seed of Creation

Possibly Sabbath also

it could be an illusion

Styx

A trick of the light

Blinded by the Light -- I dunno the Artist

On a clear Summer's night

Summer's Breeze

As I try to touch the sky

Both that "I believe I can fly" song and Hendrix's Purple Haze

The Agony and the Ecstasy

Both Spinal Tap and Metallica

This is not to say I think you are unorginal or anything, just that thos lines remind me of those songs.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

The only one i'm familiar with is Hendrix' Purple Haze. Black Sabbath, I'm very unfamiliar with, only heard about three cuts. Styx is to vomit from.

 

[The Dork Lord]

OMG, Sabbath is one of my faves! (When OZZY was still in the band, of course)

I've heard that about Styx a lot, I kinda like them

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

Blinded by the Light, I think was van Halen. Trick of the light refers to smoke and mirrors, which might work better.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

OMG, Sabbath is one of my faves! (When OZZY was still in the band, of course)

I've heard that about Styx a lot, I kinda like them

I only liked their I Robot album, the one every one hated.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

It might be an illusion
from the swoon of summer
Smoke and a rear view mirror

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

Ah. No need for that, we're all adults here. Anywway, the songs...

Sabbath -- War Pigs
Possibly Sabbath also
Styx
Blinded by the Light -- I dunno the Artist Summer's Breeze
Both that "I believe I can fly" song and Hendrix's Purple Haze
Both Spinal Tap and Metallica

This is not to say I think you are unorginal or anything, just that thos lines remind me of those songs.

The agony and the Ecstasy is a film starring Charleton heston as Michael Angelo painting the Sistine Chapel.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

http://www.cnn.com/2009/TECH/space/04/14/space.hand/index.html

Hendrix' was " 'scuse me while i kiss the sky."

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

You can scratch War Pigs. Yeah I've heard it. Didn't know what it was called. No seed of creation in it.

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

I checked out Metallica's entire catalogue. Nothing even remotely similar to mine. Nice troll.

 

[Dark Pickle]

It's not trolling, it's random lines from the songs.

 

[Dark Pickle]

You can scratch War Pigs. Yeah I've heard it. Didn't know what it was called. No seed of creation in it.

HAND OF GOD HAS STRUCK THE HOUR!

 

[Dark Pickle]

Plus/also: these are connections I MADE IN MY MIND ALONE.

Others might not think of them. They might think of other things. Poetry has always been a highly subjective artform. I wasn't accusing you of antything, or attempting to troll or anything of that nature.

I was merely pointing out what I thought of when I read that particular piece of yours.

Still friends? Yes?

 

[NeonMercuryASH]

Yes! But you scared me. I went through the entire metalica catalogue.{{{{Pickle}}}}