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Neon

I Love Cunt said:
ARe you trying to send people away from here?! Why do they have to go other places?! Whats wrong with this place? (Don't answer that) Just keep posting here! Fuck all those other boards!
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No fuck you! Nothing wrong with this place. Just giving people the option to post on another great board. And yes I will keep posting here but I will also do so at Haven, Lonaf, TKR, refcl.
 
Don't let my smile fool you
For I am so furious
Don't think I can't be cruel, too
That you would be curious
about where I've been

Did you learn nothing
from my pain?
I can hear you sing
and your brain
Can read between the lines
 
We're going through the motion
Drunk on wooden passion
Tell me
Was it an ocean?
He cooed with a wink
Or the dirty dish water
Bubbling in the sink
Coming at me with the soft fleshy parts
left over from the morning after
hungover with sick laughter
 
NeonMercuryASH said:
We're going through the motion
Drunk on wooden passion
Tell me
Was it an ocean?
Or the dirty dish water
Bubbling in the sink
We can let 'em all think
You came at me with the soft fleshy parts
left over from the morning after
hungover with sweet laughter
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Timed out. Had to quote myself to do an edit. I hate that.
 
And when your soul turns
It won't be for me
But we make our bargains
Enter our pleas
I'll blow the ash onto sea

You set your sail
A ship living in the bottle
But I
Am also fragile
Don't want to be dragged
Into your undertow
Don't you know,
My beautiful one
It skips a generation
 
Even I sent
an arrangement
To my mother's funeral
Though she prayed
I would fall
So I sent her a spray
To soften her hate
but it didn't make her rise from the dead
Small gesture
Means nothing
I hope she sleeps well
Until the bouquet
Dries with her tear
 
Motley's put me in a pissy assed mood.


Two lines

If I don't you're worthy
To get a free read
You're not worthy
To get what you need
 
Dark Pickle said:
Some of these, I can't tell if their meant to be poems or lyrics...

Not that that's a bad thing ;)
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NeonMercuryASH said:
What's the difference?
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Well for me, since I write mostly free verse poems, I don't worry about rhymes or meter, just form and meaning. Hell, even writing a rap song is different than writing some other type of song for me.

People who write more classical style poetry might find that they are indeed the same...
 
I don't give a shit about meter, pentameter, just rhythm. My stuff rhymes because that's how I talk. But I only try to rhyme the insignificant words, prepositions and such. If you rhyme significant words, it'll sound forced and fake.
 
Some one has cloned me! There's a dual running around who isn't me. From the reg date, it looks like it is Shatna. Or maybe Skinofevil.
 
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